After a too-long absence from the Adult Fiction genre, it's time for me to start writing my favorite types of stories again. You know, the ones for "mature audiences."

A few years ago I had written a couple of well-received erotic tales, but then my mainstream stuff took over and I didn't get a chance to write my other stories. But I never stopped taking notes! I have tons of story ideas, now I need your help to decide which one to tackle first.

I know you can't judge a book by its cover or a short erotic story by its title, but I don't want to give my plots away, so you'll have to play along with me and help me choose based on the working title alone.

So here's what I have. Which one(s) whet your appetite for more?

Thin Walls Again (sequel to my Thin Walls story)

Mix It Up: Poolside and Inside (the next chapter in my Mix It Up saga)

Saving Sister

Hans and Greta

A Job for the Hand

1st Cousins First

Sitting

Masks of Desire

Woody in the Morning

Red Sex Nation

Cherry on Top

Threesome: The Train Ride

Sleepover Niece

The Adventures of Lance Longley

Sweaty Sarah

Sweet Dreams

Watching

The Magical Waterfall

Kinkily Ever After

Writer's Block

Popular Girls Club

Best Buddies and Their Families

The Fantasy World of Sestia

Neighborhood Watch

Not So Little: Red Riding in the Hood

Goldie Locke and Her Three Brothers

Ariel Dreams of Joe

Guardian Angel

The Helpful Nanny

Summer Visit

Boy Wonder: Robin and Supergirl

The Dynamic Duo: Batman, Robin, Wonder Woman, and Wonder Girl

Apocalypse Wow

Late Night Movie

Sleep Deprivation

Robots and Young Women

The Secret Club

Time Travel Fun

Aphrodisia

Exes and Ohhs

I've written my second story and it's up on Literotica, and it looks like it's a big hit! Woohoo! It's called "Thin Walls" and here's the link. Please check it out and let me know what you think.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=323161

The first chapter of my story MIX IT UP has been accepted by Literotica! I'm pretty excited. Here's the link. Enjoy.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=320039

Tips for the Ladies on: How To have the best sex!
Current mood: chipper


I was chatting with some friends and laughing about how girls don't know how to
give a great blow job so i figured 'd share some light with my pals because a blow job is the
most powerful tool in our bag of tricks. So here goes:

Step 1- Make sure there is proper lubrication, either
saliva or i recomend cherry flavored lube, (it tastes
like just like candy). But don't be afraid to just
spit, guys like it cause it's real and kind of sexy
cause your taking control.

Step 2- Tease him for a little bit, don't just
starting going down til you can't breath, thats not
hot. Suck on the head only for a little bit (your man
will probably squirm because its so sensitive there)
but when you suck do it with enough suction that when
you come up it makes a popping sound, ( like when
opening the top to a can of Pringles)

Step 3- Use both hands ,THIS IS A MUST!! So many girls
try to do too much, just focus both hands on him, if
your a righty put that one at the base and the other
close to your mouth(vice versa if your a lefty). So
when you actually get to going up and down you want to
follow your mouth with hands in a twisting motion.
Each hand twisting the oppostite direction of the
other. CAUTION : Be careful you want to twist
secrurely but not too hard to where your ripping off
layers of skin.

Step 4 - NEVER NEVER USE TEETH!: Some girls use there
teeth by accident, BIG NO NO. Thats the worst thing
you can do, that is unless your guy is a freak and
likes that stuff but most treat their privates like
they are gold so don't scratch the jewels!

Step 5- So while your twisting and going down, try
going down deeper and deeper, there will be a point
where most girls choke ( i don't because of practice)
but thats where you guy feels your mouth the most
(it's warm and wet similiar to sex) So if your
switching up, play with his mind, don't just do the
same thing over and over again. Sometimes suck on just
the head while twisting with your hands and then dive
all the way down. I cannot stress how important the
hands are, it's sort of like drilling for oil.

TIP: If you surprise him with a blow job, hopefully
while he's still really soft you will get a bigger
reaction from him because he'll know you love to do
it. But if you just give blow jobs to get him off
trust me this is the quickest way to make him come.

I GUARANTEE : IF YOU DO THIS RIGHT IT WILL TAKE LESS
THAN 2 MINUTES FOR HIM TO EXPLODE!

So to all the ladies who thing it takes too long,
thats cause your not doing it right. And to the other
ladies that like to do it, this way you'll know how to
ration your time.

I'm so sorry I haven't posted a lot lately. I've been working on a play and after this weekend is over I should have more time to jump onto my other projects. I'm taking a Caribbean vacation in early March (can't wait!) and when I come back I'm beginning a monthly writers' group project which I'm really excited about. The last time I did something like that it sparked a lot of creative material and I had my first produced stage play, so I have high hopes for this one too.

My mainstream stuff that I'm working on:
1. An anthology of short screenplays for an Independent film project.
2. A couple of full-length stage plays.
3. Rewrites of all the feature-length screenplays that I've been working on over the years that are in various stages of development.

My erotic stories that I'm working on:
1. Finishing my "Mix" storyline. The first chapter I posted got rave reviews and I really want to finish the rest and share it with everyone. I didn't mean to be a tease and leave everyone hanging waiting to see what happens next to my sweet character who catches her brother masturbating. I already have a rough draft of the next two chapters and an outline of the complete story.

2. Starting a few other storylines that have been in my head for a while. I promise to get them up as soon as they're done.

3. I really would love to write an erotic screenplay, I just need to get some inspiration. :)

As always, I welcome any feedback, any ideas, any recommendations of good stories or movies or books or comics or Web sites. So don't be bashful. Let me know what you think.

Thanks.

This movie looks great! Too bad American cinema can't handle plots like this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TjdQuQGOUH8

Here's the first chapter of a longer story I'm working on. I welcome all feedback. This is a first draft. Let me know what you think.

( Mix It Up Chapter 1: The Private Place )

This is hilarious. (Warning, rated R.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jN_2u-hQOD8

Still working on my mainstream stuff to pay the bills -- my new stage play is coming along nicely, and I'm motivated to try adapting a classic epic poem into a stage play. My various screenplays are coming along in various stages.

But I've been really inspired to write more erotica. I have a couple of stories in mind: one is about a brother and sister who get "tricked" into sleeping with each other, another is about a sister who spies on her brother leading to some interesting developments, and the last one is about a guy "babysitting" a couple of trouble-making teenyboppers. We'll see how they turn out.

I've been reading a lot of erotic stories lately by Alex Hawk. His style of writing is right up my alley. His coming of age tales are very realistic, and his female characters aren't just shallow objects. His stories for the most part are very believable...and very hot. Check out his archive if you're looking for some really good adult stories...

http://www.asstr.org/~AlexHawk/Archive.html

I recently had a staged-reading of one of my screenplays and the actors I was working with encouraged me to write some stories for the stage -- so that's my next project. I'm tempted to do an anthology of short scenes dealing with sexual taboos. I wonder if the theater will be an outlet for my artistic freedom more so than the printed page or the screen. We'll see.

Thanks to everyone who recommended mainstream movies that deal with incest themes somehow like Spanking the Monkey, The Dreamers, Hotel New Hampshire, Close My Eyes, The Cement Garden, The House of Yes, Chinatown, Cruel Intentions, etc.

Now, can you all recommend some more erotic stuff that involves family members getting it on? I know about the hard-core Taboo series. I like my porn a little more soft-core, but I welcome all suggestions. I hear there are some good anime titles out there that deal with the topic. Any ideas?

I had an amazing threesome last night with my next door neighbor and her young cousin Jen. All I can say is "wow!" Incredible what a little wine with dinner can do (okay, A LOT of wine with dinner, heehee). :) Anyway, it really inspired me. I've got a bunch of story ideas in my head now. I can't wait for this project I'm working on to be finished so I can start writing my fun stuff, it's taking up so much of my time. Hopefully in a couple of weeks. Meanwhile, believe me, I'm jotting down notes to keep my ideas fresh. Where do you all get your story ideas?

I picked up a used copy of the Swedish novel (translated into English) AS THE NAKED WIND FROM THE SEA by Gustav Sandgren, thanks to a recommendation by Gentle Daddy Glen (thank you, kind sir). It's so good. I particulalry loved the scene when young Mejt, wearing sexy lingerie, walks in on her brother. Good stuff! Now if only I can track down the movie version!

I got hired to rewrite a screenplay for an independent film so that means I might not be able to do any "fun" writing for a couple of weeks. But I'm not complaining -- work is work, and I can use the money. It's always a challenge to rewrite someone else's story and try to make it better while keeping their own style and voice. And the script I need to rewrite is boring existential crap, but I'll fix it up as best I can, cash my paycheck and move on. There's a teenage girl in the script, maybe I can get away with sneaking in a scene about her masturbating under her bed covers while listening to music on her iPod. :)

I've been fighting a bitch of a cold the past week, popping Dayquil and Nyquil trying to keep myself moving during this last holiday weekend. Needless to say, not much time to do any writing, unfortunately. Sorry about that. But I did get to see some family this weekend, including my hot cousin May. Sweet Jeez, what a body she has! She always gives me such a nice hug when she sees me and always kisses me goodbye, lingering a little longer than most friendly family kisses, or is that just my lustful imagination again? Man, what I would give to cuddle naked with her for just one night...Anyway, back to my writing. Not sure when I'll be able to update again but hopefully I'll be feeling 100% soon. I hate winter.

Here are some stories I think are over-rated (and I apologize in advance if some of these are your favorites, remember this is just my humble opinion).

1. THE DREAMERS -- I was expecting a lot more eroticism and a lot more risque behavior between the brother and sister, and then the much hyped "threesome" didn't really live up to my expectations. I was literally stunned that this movie received an NC-17 rating. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice movie and very atmospheric, but not what I was hoping for.

2. THE CEMENT GARDEN -- A thriller story about a brother and sister whose parents die and they eventually end up getting sexually involved with each other. Maybe the casting didn't do it for me. I thought the film moved very very slowly. THe book was slightly better.

3. BEAU PERE -- A French movie about a young girl attracted to her father. I love the young actress, and there are a couple of very nice scenes, but the pace of the film is extremely slow. I enjoy French cinema and love how international film-makers aren't afraid to address sexual themes in their storylines, but sometimes their pacing is just deadly. I wish American filmmakers would tackle some of the same storylines.

4. TENDER COUSINS -- Director David Hamilton really knows how to film beautiful nude scenes, but in this case his movie has virtually no plot. I wish he would have some gripping storyline to keep my attention as I wait for the erotic shots which are too few and far between.

5. SWIMMING POOL -- Another film that was critically acclaimed but left me cold. I liked the ending and thought the blonde girl was hot, but again the pace was unbelievably slow and I felt like I wasted my time.

Here are the stories I'm currently working on. I'm not sure when any of them will be ready to post, but I'll definitely share them here on my journal once they're ready.

1. FREAKY FAIRY TALES: A series of erotic stories based on classic fairy tales. These are adult versions of stories like "Hansel and Gretel," "Goldilocks," "Little Red Riding Hood," Snow White," etc. A lot of other writers have taken fairy tales and made adult versions out of them, and this is my attempt to retell these tales using my own twisted imagination.

2. THE EDENFALLS CHRONICLES: My epic serial story about a small town in which everyone is doing everyone else. A lot of hooking up and twists and turns -- my favorite subplot deals with a girl who lusts after her brother (in one episode she goes to a Halloween party he's at and she dresses up in the same costume as his girlfriend and they end up having sex while he's drunk and he doesn't even realize he just nailed his sister in disguise.)

3. STAND ALONE STORIES: A bunch of stories in my head, like my "Forbidden Fruit" tale which are short and not part of an ongoing storyline.

I also want to start working on an erotic screenplay when and if I ever get the chance.

What are some of your favorite erotic stories?

Here are some of mine:

1. A couple of books by Terry Southern -- CANDY is my favorite, about a sexy but extremely innocent girl that drives everyone she meets wild with lust. I love the ending of the book, but I don't want to spoil it for anyone who hasn't read it. The movie version was a nice surprise when I saw it with some pretty famous faces like Marlon Brando, Ringo Starr, Richard Burton, John Astin, and more. (Very dated by today's standards, but it has a nice "sex is fun" feel reminiscent of many movies from the 1960s.) I also enjoyed Southern's other book THE BLUE MOVIE about a filmmaker who gets jaded with Hollywood and decides to make the raunchiest film ever made. From beginning to end, the story's satire could very easily be relevant today. Again, the ending is a bang, with a brother and sister acting out a sex scene for the cameras.

2. Movies: Wild Things, Cruel Intentions, Cruel Intentions II (mostly just the scene in which the innocent teenaged girl gets her first orgasm while learning to ride a horse), Alice in Wonderland (the x-rated adult version), Adult Fairy Tales, etc.

3. Comics: Super Taboo (the first few issues)

I'll post more when I can.

I wrote my short story "Forbidden Fruit" a couple of years ago and I would love to get feedback on it. On the surface, it's a retelling of Adam and Eve's "first sin" in the Garden of Eden. Since Eve was made from Adam's rib, I guess that makes it a tale of incest. What I enjoy about my story is that every time I read it I think of a new relationship between the characters -- sometimes I pretend that they're brother and sister, sometimes they're father and daughter, other times they're first cousins. Other times my imagination runs wild and I think of different scenarios, like it's an uncle being seduced by his neice, or a guy making love to his sister's best friend. It makes the story fresh each time for me. I hope you enjoy reading it. You can find it here on my journal:

http://www.livejournal.com/users/newdorado/733.html

Please let me know what you think of it. What do you love, what do you hate? Do you have a different kinky idea about the characters' relationship? What can I do to make it better? Let me know.

My other stories are a little more graphic and explicit at times, but I still enjoy creating believable characters. And my other stories tend to be longer and part of series, so this I hope is a short and sweet stand-alone sample of my writing style.

Thanks for reading.